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A fool
Contributed by
Flex4life13
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Thursday, 12th May 2011 @ 03:34:29 PM in AEST
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anguished
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Yet it tore us apart, was it us or was it not?
Our little four letter word which crumbled at the core.
one day we only wish to gain wisdom.
How we despise to feel just mediocore.
Everlastingly, failing to extend beyond our reach
and to latch onto what is ours to keep.
If only we can be that of a leach,
Effortlessly clinging on nearly skin deep.
An animal, it battles its way from underneath
the unconcscious timid beast, which feeds within me
Why must i feed it, with every memory sharpening its teeth
For I am just a fool, a fool is what I remain to be.
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Re: A fool
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by iodinelove on
Saturday, 14th May 2011 @ 10:23:53 PM AEST
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Re: A fool
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by InfinitePoet on
Monday, 23rd May 2011 @ 11:53:42 AM AEST
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Great write i liked the flow and th terms you used in this one!!! you'll go along way !Just keep finetuning your craft everyday!! I try to write everyday at least one or start one!! it's great practice!!
Keep writing and posting!
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