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~Soft Breezes and pouring rain~
Contributed by
shelby
on
Sunday, 8th May 2011 @ 01:44:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The wind chimes danced and played a tune
the wind drifted softly in the window.
Another storm brewing, no spring night warmth.
The rains came once more.
The wind, the chimes and the pattering rain
the only sound I heard, no city noise, it seemed drowned
not a single chirping bird, the night a misty wonderland.
The candle in the dimly lit living room
seemed to dance along,
with natures soft breeze and pouring rain
midnights sweetest song.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2011-05-08 13:44:38] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: ~Soft Breezes and pouring rain~
(User Rating: 1 ) by iodinelove on
Saturday, 14th May 2011 @ 10:29:40 PM AEST (User
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It stormed here Wednesday, and I was out of power for two days...
I had a point about that, but have forgotten it...
Anyway, good poem Shelby. Keep writing. Always, Abraham. |
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Re: ~Soft Breezes and pouring rain~
(User Rating: 1 ) by Spike on
Thursday, 2nd June 2011 @ 11:30:48 PM AEST (User
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Shelly,
this held me in a trance from first word to last syllable.
Spike |
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