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Perception
Contributed by
Chenobi
on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 12:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Trainscaping, landshaking
Breathtaking sunbreaking
I found it hard to focus
So I did not try at all
With this I was simplifying sight
And intricating life
Because refusing to see
Means refusing to believe
But if believing is seeing
I can turn my life
Into a simple sight
And will not have to bother
To intricate life
A rapid ray of golden light
Hit my eyes as sudden
As an unknown fright
Now that I was blind
I wondered
Wasn't it the other way around?
Copyright ©
Chenobi
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2003-04-28 00:35:00]
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Re: Perception
(User Rating: 1 )
by eric on
Tuesday, 13th May 2003 @ 08:08:44 AM AEST
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| plenty of energy in this poem |
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Re: Perception
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by norm on
Tuesday, 13th May 2003 @ 01:00:28 PM AEST
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you write so well...i really must read more
of you to know you better |
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