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The Morning
Contributed by
jonteD
on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 10:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The morning came too early,
Some awake joker on the radio,
All bright and breezy,
The bed is empty, I feel uneasy.
Top of the morning?
No good days to you dear sir,
Nothing has changed overnight,
Still alone but my heart alight.
She came to me last night,
As she always does,
Stole heart, soul and mind,
At one stage bodies entwined.
But by the first light,
She was long gone,
Left memories of such care,
Sweet, loving, but she’s not here.
Copyright ©
jonteD
... [
2003-04-27 22:05:00]
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Re: The Morning
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 11:02:03 PM AEST
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| dearest jonteD, great write:) i love the whispy dreamy flow and style in this poem, i am left wondering if she has gone off somewhere, or if she were only a vivid dream:) either way! write on! hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The Morning
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by greeneyes on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 11:17:41 PM AEST
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Dreams can come true, great write.
Nancy |
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Re: The Morning
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 08:00:55 AM AEST
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Loved this, Jon....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: The Morning
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by Wilder on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 03:12:32 PM AEST
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| a dreamy, inspired poem. 10/10 |
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Re: The Morning
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 07:21:34 PM AEST
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This was awesome,loved it.
A mysterious poem for you to solve.
Excellent write. |
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