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My Soul In The Looking Glass
Contributed by
CrimsonTears
on
Wednesday, 4th May 2011 @ 09:57:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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I stare through the looking glass
And see my broken soul hiding in my eyes
Crying out to be freed from the sorrow I hold inside
Hidden by my smile and all the joy-filled lies
So I take out my trusty razor blade
And glide it smoothly across my thigh
Trying to relieve the pain that grips my soul
Because other comforts are in short supply
Now I watch the deep crimson drops
As they stain my ivory white skin
Then I look back at my quieted soul
And I know, for now, there’s less pain within
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CrimsonTears
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2011-05-04 21:57:35]
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Re: My Soul In The Looking Glass
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by Kinnat on
Wednesday, 4th May 2011 @ 11:33:25 PM AEST
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Interesting poem.
I like how blatant it is.
And also how it seems to explain smoothly how loneliness and masochism can go hand in hand.. |
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Re: My Soul In The Looking Glass
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by emystar on
Thursday, 5th May 2011 @ 08:10:19 AM AEST
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Very sad but well written.
Blessings, prayers,
emy |
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