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Did I see
Contributed by
nonefound
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Wednesday, 4th May 2011 @ 06:38:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Stare and think
Fathom the words
You wish to say
Aura, colour bright
Purple fairy leaves
You transfixed,stare
Stop your steps
Yet unseen she goes
Left with a feeling
Puzzlement
Deer and dove
Fairies and gnomes
Human folk left to frown
Did they glimpse?
Or was she there?
Walking in the forest
Deep in thought
Breezes blow
Leaves, swirl
Perfume fills the air
Purple fairy and friends
Busy with fairy things
People and fairies mix
Rarely get a glimpse
Busy in thoughts
Of our own things.
Nonefound
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2011-05-04 18:38:58]
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Re: Did I see
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by Kinnat on
Wednesday, 4th May 2011 @ 11:39:05 PM AEST
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I like this one not only for my love of lore and mysticism.
I think you did well with painting the picture.
And I find it interesting that it is so forward that I had to read it twice to appreciate the subtleties. |
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Re: Did I see
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by Dirkj on
Thursday, 5th May 2011 @ 02:18:04 AM AEST
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| i think we can all see fairies if we really want to - nice write, am also waiting for that moment |
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Re: Did I see
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by emystar on
Thursday, 5th May 2011 @ 07:58:04 AM AEST
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Great writing.
I also think we can all see them if we wonna.
keep writing., It's magic.
Blessings,
emy |
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