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Blood Dripping
Contributed by
Dirkj
on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2011 @ 02:58:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Your eyes
Inside the bottle of wine
I had
Everywhere
Your eyes stare at me
I am the purist
And you a badly made movie
That I hate
But i am attracted to you
Like a moth to a flame
I burn my fingers
Everytime
I touch your pretty hands
When I see you
I see a landscape made in heaven
I see trees and beautiful flowers
But I know it's hell instead
Everything turns into burnt
Self centered images
On deadly ground
Blood dripping
Blood….your most favorite drink
Dripping from
Every memory you have ever formed
Blood dripping in delight
From you somber white face
Those pretty hollow eyes
Shriek with an unstable laughter
….With such delight
As you nail my picture
Against your wall
One more time
Victim no so and so
How do you live with yourself
At the end of the day
Copyright ©
Dirkj
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2011-05-03 02:58:35]
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Re: Blood Dripping
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by Banjosandwitch on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2011 @ 07:14:36 AM AEST
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| love the title |
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Re: Blood Dripping
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by ElementZero on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2011 @ 07:17:19 AM AEST
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| Good poem. Lots of imagery. Sounds akin to any vampiric poem. Good job. |
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Re: Blood Dripping
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2011 @ 10:02:45 AM AEST
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I really like this flow
well done...... |
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Re: Blood Dripping
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by deusdeira on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2011 @ 11:21:09 AM AEST
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| I love metaphors. Great job. What you describe sounds like obsession on her part. |
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Re: Blood Dripping
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by Harsh on
Wednesday, 4th May 2011 @ 12:02:41 AM AEST
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gOOD WRITE
qUITE iMAGINATIVE
cONGROS |
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