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Leave Me Here
Contributed by
theunknown
on
Monday, 2nd May 2011 @ 07:41:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm not the girl you think you know
I never was and never will be
If I show you the real me
Take me or leave me
You can't make me change
I can't make you stay
You say you love me
We both know you'll be gone by morning
I'll be left with a broken heart and shattered trust
So leave me before I fall even more
I'll love you forever but I can't do this
Don't lie to me and stay or I'll never forgive you
I love you
But, leave me here and go on your own
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theunknown
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2011-05-02 19:41:53]
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Re: Leave Me Here
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by ElementZero on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2011 @ 07:19:43 AM AEST
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| A lot of raw emotions I see from this poem. Unrequited love. A man who doesn't want them for them and only for their bodies or even a man who falls out of love with their woman - whatever you interrupt it. Good job though. |
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Re: Leave Me Here
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by babiidem on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2011 @ 08:55:26 AM AEST
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| love this its very good |
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Re: Leave Me Here
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2011 @ 10:05:06 AM AEST
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| Good raw emotional torture in this |
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Re: Leave Me Here
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by deusdeira on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2011 @ 11:18:59 AM AEST
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| a good "take me for what i am" poem. |
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