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when dark gave birth to light
Contributed by
LadyDama
on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 07:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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quietly she steps
amongst the black wilted roses
littered on the floor
tiptoeing softly
through the broken bones
attempting to heal...
blood drips silently
from a crack in the ceiling
into a crystal lake
a cobweb of dreams
sits on a shelf
collecting like a magnet
white lace protrudes from her wrists
a black velvet coat touches her ankles
a blade of love
presents itself
and plunges deep
into the unknown
slicing the world in which she lives
breaking open the gates
of despair that she is accustomed to
and allowing a river of life to flow
~cascading on darkness
and begating the light
she still hugs her black rose
her velvet robes and dark musick
for they are who she is
but
she now also embraces
the light which appears
under the door
march 17, 2003
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LadyDama
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2003-04-27 19:35:00]
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Re: when dark gave birth to light
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 07:59:40 PM AEST
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good write
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Re: when dark gave birth to light
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by TheSpiritx on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 08:36:46 PM AEST
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very abstract, good imagery. The reader is able to picture the scene as you want, while still having room for their own creativity to peek through occasionally.
TS |
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Re: when dark gave birth to light
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 09:04:05 PM AEST
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| Sweetheart, this is so BREATHTAKING, loved every words of it, it reminds me of a picture, so elegant, thanks for sharing, always Val |
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Re: when dark gave birth to light
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by shelby on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 02:03:35 AM AEST
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amazing write, I enjoyed this
Michelle |
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Re: when dark gave birth to light
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by spooky on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 06:18:14 AM AEST
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| well written,,berautiful imagination,, a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: when dark gave birth to light
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by venkat on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 06:29:02 AM AEST
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| " a blade of love presents it self and plunges dep into the unknown slicing the world in which she lives' great lines.. powerful poetry. venkat |
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Re: when dark gave birth to light
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 08:18:05 AM AEST
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Beautiful beyond compare, such a flowing poem with an intense rythem to it.
The picture was so vivid it was like being there watching the scene unfold right through to the conclusion.
Excellent write Ladydrama. |
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Re: when dark gave birth to light
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 03:05:29 PM AEST
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I saw the light in this poem from the very first sentence. Brilliance in words! Enjoyed the flow wholeheartedly!
Angel always...Godspeed,my friend! Joni |
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Re: when dark gave birth to light
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by darkmind on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 04:17:26 PM AEST
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| I really like this poem |
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