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A waste of mind.
Contributed by
huwbeauty
on
Sunday, 1st May 2011 @ 09:50:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Pages,
sneering empty pages,
still no words or rhyme, no melody,
At least no rages.
Crazy,
this self restrained crazy,
is constrained sublime, lethargy,
Am I just lazy.
Phases,
bright light diffused phases,
rare moments I find, clarity,
That's so persuasive.
Jaded,
all these thoughts are jaded,
such a waste of mind, gracefully,
my dreams have faded,
Painfully,
my soul degraded.
Copyright ©
huwbeauty
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2011-05-01 09:50:03]
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Re: A waste of mind.
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by cashfan1 on
Sunday, 1st May 2011 @ 11:38:17 AM AEST
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Mat
Well done. As always very strong writing, well constructed and brilliantly executed. In fact with this poem, I think you have got even stronger.
Thanks again for another gem. |
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Re: A waste of mind.
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by northernlights on
Sunday, 1st May 2011 @ 12:53:10 PM AEST
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| Certainly not a waste of paper,your thoughts and expression throughout starts with a connection that just deepens as the feelings makes each and every frustration so identifiable,concluding with ongoing struggle,empathic writing,exciting in its depth and interesting in its familiarity. |
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Re: A waste of mind.
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 2nd May 2011 @ 12:00:04 AM AEST
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All the flows of words floating through your mind
put perfectly on a line
well done.... |
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Re: A waste of mind.
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by deusdeira on
Saturday, 14th May 2011 @ 03:50:39 AM AEST
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| I loved this poem! Such a unique style, and you pulled it off! It really gets the point across! |
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