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Limbo
Contributed by
Butterat_Zool
on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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The busy bees they fly around
and work away the day
but nothing’s done
as life’s begun and slowly slips away.
The crystal methods that you use
to tread the iron seas
will soon collapse
and disappear as all your muscles seize.
The clouds and mists that whip about
in perfect foggy dreams
can only tell
you what you think, and never what you mean.
Without the aim to stay afloat
you aim to aim to please,
and find yourself
in perfect Hell down on your calloused knees.
Your tempered soul cannot perceive
the evils in the air,
but stupid rich
suburban white kids have no time to care.
You fear success and hate to fail
as only you could know,
but Heaven helps
no man who dies to end up in Limbo.
The quakes and fires summoned forth
will ravage any foe
and Heaven helps
no man who dies without a prayer to show.
The floods and demons follow next
as anyone should know,
and Heaven helps
no man who drowns in pity and in woe.
The Earth is burst, the daylight dawns
and soot shall fall as snow,
but God will leave
your ass behind when all the rest will go.
Copyright ©
Butterat_Zool
... [
2003-04-27 18:05:00]
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Re: Limbo
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by LadyDama on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 03:02:28 AM AEST
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| this is freaking awesome!!!.... oh my gosh... i love the last line!!... to be quite honest, i am not of the Christian faith, however, i have high regards for any person who follows their faith truthfully... this poem rocks... you have done very well here... excellent... blessings... michele |
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Re: Limbo
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 06:17:08 AM AEST
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| Simply brilliant ... awesome. |
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Re: Limbo
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by Crys on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 08:02:24 AM AEST
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I've stated before that Im Wiccan, but i do respects your beleifs. I can't help but marvel at your work. I've found your religious pieces extremely beautiful. It shows your faith, Bless you!
*~*Crys*~* |
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Re: Limbo
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by chris3btine77 on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 03:18:30 PM AEST
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| Excellent write |
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