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Floating
Contributed by
Flex4life13
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Saturday, 30th April 2011 @ 05:29:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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What time can give, time can take.
Not a thing to say but to watch and wait.
overcome, overwhelm, understand, compensate.
Constant struggles inherent in our fate.
Comparatively a wind driven leaf, it floats as if in a hurry.
It will arrive to its destined place.
Without regrets, without a sorry
we too must float on with everloving grace.
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2011-04-30 05:29:48]
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Re: Floating
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by poeticjestix on
Saturday, 30th April 2011 @ 10:45:38 AM AEST
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| are you telling me to be thankful for my lot? If so, you're right! |
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Re: Floating
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 30th April 2011 @ 07:50:35 PM AEST
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| This is a nice description of the brevity of life. I like the image of the leaf being in a hurry. |
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Re: Floating
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 25th March 2013 @ 06:59:30 AM AEST
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Deep Innervision
well done....... |
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