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a good time

Contributed by djstoute897 on Friday, 29th April 2011 @ 06:35:16 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

hold my hand
dont let me fall
lets be frainds
and tose a ball

we can dance
all night,
and play all day

jump around
and say
hey hey

yes we are
older
but who cares

lets have a good
time
and go to the fair

we can have fun
we can talk
alot

you could let it out
and tell me what
u thout

we got really
close and
that made me happy

but lets be glad it
wasnt to sappy
i didnt cry those happy
tears

but yes i smiled in
cheer
we did some crazy
stuff,
but we are just
ingoying life

Copyright © djstoute897 ... [ 2011-04-29 18:35:16]
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Re: a good time (User Rating: 1 )
by hacktastic on Saturday, 30th April 2011 @ 12:24:40 AM AEST
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Two things:

(1) There are a few words that need to be ran through spell check.

(2) Please show this to whom ever inspired this. They will love it. It is very thoughtful of you to take the time to put all of that together.

There is a sweet sort of purity to this and I like it. Nice job.

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