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murderer

Contributed by xbabycyutie on Thursday, 28th April 2011 @ 11:25:08 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Since the day I met you I thought you'll be my friend forever
But it hurts more than you can imagine, cause now I know that its over
Through all the happy times we've been through I can never understand
Why you threw it all away, something I can't stand
I hope you know that whenever I hear your voice feels like heaven and hell
I'm happy we're talking, but a part of me just wants to scream HELP!
You torture me everytime
But I always try to pretend like I'm fine
You're hurting me and you KNOW it, why can't you just say goodbye
I won't keep waiting for you day by day
I won't keep looking at my phone for that message that never came
I won't keep listening to your life
Every word you say cuts like a knife
I can't keep thinking about whats gonna happen tomorrow
Whether or not you will call or i'd have to suffer in sorrow
You can't put me off to the side like I don't matter
I can't let you do that cause I SHOULD KNOW BETTER
Count the chances I gave you
The opportunities I handed right to you
You treated them all as a joke
Each times you'd ignore me, felt like a grasp for breath cause I felt like I've choked
You're a murderer, I should say
Killing me with a care that was FAKE
Stabs and stabs until I'm wounded
Tell me why until now you're not contented
At this point I can honestly say that I'm through
You murdered the me that once cared,& you don't even have a clue

Copyright © xbabycyutie ... [ 2011-04-28 23:25:08]
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Re: murderer (User Rating: 1 )
by RachelSixx on Monday, 2nd May 2011 @ 05:23:11 PM AEST
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very nice, your emotion really comes through. great job.

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