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Nocturne Lullaby
Contributed by
spike
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Wednesday, 27th April 2011 @ 10:49:39 PM in AEST
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like silver threads
through curtains peek,
the moonbeams
lay across your cheek,
and downy pillows sigh aloud
to hold you like a floating cloud
...to yawn
the heavens twinkle
in delight,
now that they have the night
to sprinkle stardust in your eyes,
body too heavy to arise
...to stretch
the lights are dimmed,
the curtains drawn
to stay that way until the dawn;
and all the world
enjoys a peace
that only comes with sweet release
...to sleep
Copyright ©
spike
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2011-04-27 22:49:39]
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Re: Nocturne Lullaby
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by northernlights on
Wednesday, 27th April 2011 @ 10:57:30 PM AEST
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| perfect verse verse lovely write |
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Re: Nocturne Lullaby
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by emystar on
Thursday, 28th April 2011 @ 01:12:03 AM AEST
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Heavenly beautiful.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Nocturne Lullaby
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by Dirkj on
Thursday, 28th April 2011 @ 05:12:48 AM AEST
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| WOW nice work |
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Re: Nocturne Lullaby
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by shelby on
Thursday, 28th April 2011 @ 10:13:55 AM AEST
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This is heaven in itself. I loved this verse.
Of course I love everything you write. Nice to read you again my sweet friend I sure miss ya
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Nocturne Lullaby
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by spud on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2011 @ 07:21:05 AM AEST
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Hi Spike,
This could deservedly grace the scrolls of the
immortals.
''Proper words in proper places, make the
true definition of a style.'' (Swift)
Tommy
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