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fight or night?
Contributed by
goshali3rd
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Tuesday, 26th April 2011 @ 03:55:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I'm just so lost.
I need saving from myself.
I'm my own executioner.
my date is drawing closer.
my Walls are breaking away.
I can't hide from it anymore.
it's going to catch me up.
I'm giving up the chase.
it's too hard to fight.
I'm weak from running.
its consuming me.
no escape.
no hope.
someone please be my saviour.
my light in the dark.
fill me up with false promises.
atleast for the meantime.
just give me that last spec of hope.
to keep me here for longer.
I know when you let go I will fall harder than ever.
im ready for the fight.
ready for the everlasting night
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2011-04-26 15:55:03]
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Re: fight or night?
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 26th April 2011 @ 06:48:08 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Very sad but good writing.
There's always hope as long as there is breathe in the body.
Hope you feel better soon. Keep writing.
Blessings, prayer,
emy |
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Re: fight or night?
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by Camba_08 on
Tuesday, 26th April 2011 @ 06:52:26 PM AEST
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| do this, smack yourself while looking in the mirror but do it hard. now you'll see how stupid it is to hurt yourself. haha good poem !!! |
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