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A Young Woman
Contributed by
Deidra_Carmichael
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Tuesday, 26th April 2011 @ 12:26:47 PM in AEST
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A young woman has many thoughts in mind
Who to befriend, how to behave, and perhaps how to look
Elegance is revealed within every curl of her brunette mane
And sophistication in her charming stride
Yet there is one element missing
And by all means she knows it very well
Handsome gentlemen give here the eye
Waiting to be fallen for at the same time
But this maiden treats them as mere passers-by
After all what true affection have they ever shown her
It is true the grasp of a fair hand is thoughtful
Still the thoughtfulness of a true lover is appreciated more
And so miss independent is contemplating her disposition
A free and single woman is not hurt yet is not adored
By a faithful lover who is worth fighting for
Perhaps the reluctant heart she hold will be placed in good hands
Yet there is no way to find out unless she goes through with her plans
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Re: A Young Woman
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by poeticjestix on
Tuesday, 26th April 2011 @ 01:23:53 PM AEST
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so, did she finally go for the boob job, or not?
Can't even pretend to know what goes through the mind of a woman, especially a young one. These days, it's false tan and har extensions all around. |
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Re: A Young Woman
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Tuesday, 26th April 2011 @ 04:02:34 PM AEST
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| You make me laugh. I meant what goes on in the mind of a sophisticated and mature young woman. Otherwise, you'd be correct |
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