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Clouds of Reality
Contributed by
Tomboy
on
Sunday, 24th April 2011 @ 06:19:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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White puffy transparent pillows in the air
Inside of them nothingness
Floating, carried by the breeze
The hands of time
Changing, transforming into shapes
Funnel
Boot
Islands
Geese
Dogs
Faces,
Trees
Rockets
Angels
Religious emblems,
Colors, black, gray, rainbow,
Hands
Eyes
Flying freely against the clear crystal-blue sky.
Gaze upon them,
See the story they tell.
Are they illusions, hallucinations or reality?
Sight is in the eye of the onlooker.
Copyright ©
Tomboy
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2011-04-24 18:19:54]
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Re: Clouds of Reality
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by myheartsvoice on
Sunday, 24th April 2011 @ 09:06:58 PM AEST
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mmmmm, your poetry so vivid so
soothing to read, a doorway to all
and anything that is possible, just
lovely.
Ben |
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Re: Clouds of Reality
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by Butterflyperfect on
Sunday, 24th April 2011 @ 10:00:49 PM AEST
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| I really like how you structured this and how it is just so easy to read. Amazing! |
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Re: Clouds of Reality
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 25th April 2011 @ 11:05:41 AM AEST
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| Lovely imagery engulfed within a beautiful format...A very fitting title.... |
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