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Glass House
Contributed by
Jaima
on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I'm running from this monster,
That's hunting me down,
It's taking me over,
It wont stop till I'm found.
I'm afriad of the unknown,
But what is unknown now,
Was once very know,
And it's ironic somehow.
But I live in a glass house,
Throwing stones at the wall,
I watch as it crashes down,
I love to watch it fall.
Copyright ©
Jaima
... [
2003-04-27 12:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Glass House
(User Rating: 1 ) by Daydreamer on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 01:46:23 PM AEST (User
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Wow..I liked your poem..very sad~Day~ |
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Re: Glass House
(User Rating: 1 ) by faffeee on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 02:03:52 PM AEST (User
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i especially like the last stanza, it has a sad significance and strong imagery. well done! xxx |
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Re: Glass House
(User Rating: 1 ) by AngryPrincess on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 04:34:14 PM AEST (User
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very very good poem and GREAT imagry...keep up the GREAT writing...
Lindsey |
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Re: Glass House
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 09:26:26 AM AEST (User
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Wow! I really like this. Great work.
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Re: Glass House
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jaima on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 09:28:25 AM AEST (User
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ahh it's not really that sad. |
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Re: Glass House
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jaima on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 09:30:57 AM AEST (User
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thank you |
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Re: Glass House
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jaima on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 09:32:57 AM AEST (User
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thanks |
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Re: Glass House
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jaima on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 09:34:42 AM AEST (User
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thank you |
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