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Red Petals in the Snow
Contributed by
deusdeira
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Tuesday, 19th April 2011 @ 03:45:49 AM in AEST
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A soft red petal gently glides,
and lands upon the snow,
A final breath of life is spun,
where hope would never go,
Frozen and preserved in snow,
this petal… is not lost,
But frozen life is just a dream…
The host will pay the cost,
For when it thaws… it will not be,
a petal without frost,
With thawing frost… a memory…
Will fade without a thought,
And melt away this bitter taste,
The frost within this mind,
Oh bring me back to better days,
A petal ... so divine.
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2011-04-19 03:45:49]
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Re: Red Petals in the Snow
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by myheartsvoice on
Tuesday, 19th April 2011 @ 09:48:59 AM AEST
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" Oh bring me back to better days, "
Wow! truer words were never spoken.
ty 4 ur comment.
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Re: Red Petals in the Snow
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 19th April 2011 @ 10:55:12 AM AEST
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| Beautiful melancholic concept, concluded by an exquisite last verse of longing and hope, lovely write. |
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Re: Red Petals in the Snow
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by poeticjestix on
Monday, 25th April 2011 @ 10:51:28 AM AEST
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petals in the snow, a lovely thought.
petals in the bin. That's their usual destiny.
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