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hurley girl and surfer chick
Contributed by
stateofgray
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Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 10:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Hurley girl and Surfer chick
I used to want Hurley girls
And surfer chicks.
Girls that like Rip Kurl’s
Board and laughing flicks
They are what I wanted at a past present
A girl that thought for herself and meant it.
Contrary to pop culture T.V
She was the a girl not many could see
I wanted a girl that dressed like a surfer
With jeans and sandals and Hurley – a server
Of everything good and polite
And as ridiculous as it seems, knew to fly a kite.
I wanted her to teach me as
Much as I could teach her, and pass
Every standard set- my mind set by far exceeded.
Shakespearean loves story with her; be completely repeated
And she had brown straight hair
We would match, perfect, an exact pair.
A team, a girl, that was the one
One that was nice to everyone and didn’t shun.
I wanted her so much
So is the case in dreams, it was her I could touch.
I remember my sporadic ideal
Of the brown hair girl, in my dreams, tangible, her I feel.
She wore beads, not in exaggeration
But I knew she was only in imagination.
She would find me finding her
But the probabilities of chances never were
Some say the arrow of love is struck in an instant
But I kept looking persistent.
So I gave up the chase
And I settled in circumstantial race
And I found the girl of my dreams!
Only I was settled - at her sight and thought my eyes were reamed.
I wish I could get out of what I was in
I wished I was not committing a cosmic sin
But by the time I was out
By the time I was ready to shout
“ You, you are my dream girl” it ended
at the first notice, a relationship she mended
and all my aspiration to rapture
was wrapped up, collected, captured
and thrown into the pits of nothing.
My heart, my soul, and mind didn’t stop fussing
And I never forgave myself for my lack of waiting.
Guilt ate away at my heart- self-hating
And I was thrown into a hole of
Unbearable loss of love
And I concluded that fate
Would be locked at my gate
And I would eternally ***** it up
For its audacious hiccup
Because whatever fate was, it kept ruining my life
Because whatever fate was, I wanted to stab myself with a knife
My life, my knife, my mother and friends
The memory of Hurley girl and surfer chick never ends
But in the negativity of it all
I’ve been able to rise out of the fall
And in a metamorphosis of self
I’d fail forgotten - that girl bad to my health.
I haven’t forgotten the Hurley girl and surfer chick
The one that made me wither and sick
And I can’t forget fate.
I did lock it up in my gate
But after a faithful talk
And after pensive walks
I concluded it did not deserved beating
Or to get utterly ***** up-seeing
That in truth, fate was just doing its job
And I stopped forever the internal sob.
I told everyone ever hurt by fate
That in time, life, money and mates
Would come at due
In time that their rage, over-zeal and depression mellowed their hues.
I started to believe in dreams again
And still held that dream girl title
To one girl once past, but now hopefully in the future , my idol
And ideal of her, but I waited
And prefer to wait than give in to feelings hated.
Her, is the person that I think I still need
Such is the lesson the Hurley girl and surfer chick – never let me be
And I remember I should have waited to pick
Instead of following my heart I decided to follow my *****.
The girl I used to conceive and think of that was kind
I have to search and search, and wait, and find
All over, over again, I will continue to pride my might
And in spite of quasi bravado, I’ll be alright.
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stateofgray
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Re: hurley girl and surfer chick
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by Ravi on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 11:28:36 AM AEST
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| Good write.I pray with my all my heart that you find your girl soon |
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Re: hurley girl and surfer chick
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by Daydreamer on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 02:17:39 PM AEST
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| This was a good write..I hope you find your dream girl and I hope everything works out between you two...best wishes ~Day~ |
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Re: hurley girl and surfer chick
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 08:33:51 AM AEST
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Dam good write, Had distinct flavour to it.
Hope you find the mystery girl.
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