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what I had

Contributed by poeticsnowman on Monday, 18th April 2011 @ 11:10:11 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



This world that I'm in is thoughtless and pitty, I'm all alone now yeah I know it's *****ty, I still don't understand how it all came to this, life is a ***** it left me in a ditch, just like my heart it wasn't about all the ***** that I had, just pick up the pieces and throw them in a bag, I'm all by myself everything is lost, I traveled to far I didn't know what it cost, I'd give it all up for the one that I miss, I'd give it all up just for a kiss, the ***** that I have means nothing to me, I'm lost without you I can't even breath, just take my hand and hold it real tight, for once in my life my world will be right.




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Re: what I had (User Rating: 1 )
by Onslaught on Tuesday, 19th April 2011 @ 01:12:15 AM AEST
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I know exactly how you feel, and I'm sorry you are going through this. I was definitely able to feel the intense emotions you are going through, through this. My closest friend, an amazing unique person is actually missing. Filed the missing person's report yesterday, talk about devastation. I'd give anything to know shes safe, none of my stuff, nothing in this world means anything.


Re: what I had (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Tuesday, 19th April 2011 @ 01:49:37 AM AEST
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Deeply Emotional
well done.


Re: what I had (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Tuesday, 19th April 2011 @ 02:56:04 AM AEST
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It sounds like you have traveled too far down the road of love my friends. Try to find your way back to reality. Never fall to far, or you have to climb back up to life when love crumbles beneath you.


Re: what I had (User Rating: 1 )
by Banjosandwitch on Tuesday, 19th April 2011 @ 06:05:18 AM AEST
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NO STRUCTUREgive me clue what the **** are set it out better you'll get a better responce but overall not a bad effort


Re: what I had (User Rating: 1 )
by restinpeace on Tuesday, 19th April 2011 @ 05:08:07 PM AEST
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true, and deep, great job




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