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Losing Myself
Contributed by
Rx1471
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Monday, 18th April 2011 @ 10:47:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Those Eyes Lock Me In
I Just Can’t Look Away
I’m Losing Myself
As You Capture My Heart
With A Single Glance
I’m Lost Once More
And Nothing Can Save Me Now
I Continue To Fall
Fall Slowly For You
And The Worst Part Is
I Can’t See It Happening To You
My Mind Is Losing Control
Trying To Find A Sign
Searching For A Chance
That You Could Be Mine
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Rx1471
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2011-04-18 10:47:29]
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Re: Losing Myself
(User Rating: 1 )
by brialuv on
Monday, 18th April 2011 @ 11:00:18 AM AEST
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| nice poem def relatable |
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Re: Losing Myself
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by deusdeira on
Tuesday, 19th April 2011 @ 03:49:49 AM AEST
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| I like it, but rhyme would definitely make it an easier read. Still it expresses how you feel well. :) I am partial to analogies and sometimes being vague, but that's just the artist in me. :p |
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