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California Dreaming

Contributed by euphoema on Monday, 18th April 2011 @ 10:29:35 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

I went to bed in a dusty room
Filled with June gloom
What state am I in, in
My mental mind?
As I fall asleep gone with the wind
It feels as if milliseconds have passed
Teleported, or am I mushshroomin
Awake on my back
Facing a sky full of blue
I can only see clearly if my hand shades my vision
Damn its blue!
A type of blue, that cannot be compared with the royalist or the babiest of blues.
Gives me opposite of the blues
Makes me glad to be in my shoes
Words can’t describe the blue sky, so I’ll stop trying
As I arise to face the sun as it climbs west
Almost tilted to rest
Well seasoned day
I'm so excited must I say

I hear classical music and its fading the natural sounds that surround me
As the heat is hushed by a gust of wind
That scrapped the ocean surface
Attacks my nose
I don’t need a rose
Crusted golden lands
Filled with grains of sand
Hills and valleys, forest filled with sensimilla
It’s an agriculture state
Filled with the finest soil
Lands of toil
Overwhelmed with beauty
On a winter day the sun comes to break the clouds away

Far off I gaze the oceans in a craze
Reflected with sun rays
I hear a sound
Swish, swish, as if Kobe’s around
And splish splash as if I was taking a bath
North I face
All those seem so far, but yet so close!
I look east I see bars and streets!
That soon will be filled
Music and women
And spirits distilled
I see the night life waking up
Streetlights calling me forth…
I go and go forward I go
Back and back my forwardness goes
as I run, I wake, in the dusty old room filled with June gloom
im swept away like dust by a broom
as i come to
to realize I was California dreaming

Copyright Â© euphoema ... [ 2011-04-18 10:29:35]
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Re: California Dreaming (User Rating: 1 )
by philiphemsby on Monday, 1st August 2011 @ 03:34:11 PM AEST
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thats pretty awesome, right up my street

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