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dreams are left to rust
Contributed by
stateofgray
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Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 09:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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"Dreams are left to rust "
Dreams are left to rust
When we become influenced by worldly lust.
The start of Eden is fun
But at downfall; defeat we start to shun
The precious joys of life-short live.
Lax insouciance we give.
Our temple's sanctuary turns to dust,
And our dreams are left to rust.
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2003-04-27 09:35:00]
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Re: dreams are left to rust
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by tease_whizz on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 12:02:08 PM AEST
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| this is great - i like it because its concise but with depth and some great imagery. keep writing, Kate x |
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Re: dreams are left to rust
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 12:15:27 PM AEST
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profound
Shari |
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Re: dreams are left to rust
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by Daydreamer on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 01:54:11 PM AEST
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| WoW...I liked this poem alot..you did a good job..keep writting..~Day~ |
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Re: dreams are left to rust
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 09:58:40 AM AEST
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Wow! This is really good. i really enjoyed it!
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Re: dreams are left to rust
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by Hades on
Monday, 31st January 2011 @ 03:28:25 PM AEST
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| Very profound, and very well written. Nicely done! |
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