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Numb
Contributed by
scottstone
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Saturday, 16th April 2011 @ 09:47:08 PM in AEST
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You make me feel nothing
From the verbal fights
To the awkward silence
To this open flame I’m touching
For a fool calls everyone foolish
Does that make me a clown?
From all the hate you’ve fired at me
And all those times you put me down
And it wasn’t always like this
We used to be close friends
But you stole everything for yourself
And I’ve never felt real since then
Copyright ©
scottstone
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2011-04-16 21:47:08]
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Re: Numb
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by Tomboy on
Sunday, 17th April 2011 @ 07:25:21 AM AEST
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| very welll done |
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Re: Numb
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 17th April 2011 @ 08:40:28 AM AEST
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| I like this ALOT! Your emotion in this write is well executed & able to relate 2. |
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Re: Numb
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by emystar on
Sunday, 17th April 2011 @ 09:52:20 PM AEST
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So sad but great writing.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Numb
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 19th April 2011 @ 01:58:41 AM AEST
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Love turns to Hate
classic stuff
well done. |
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