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The Impossible Rainbow
Contributed by
thistle_and_fern
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Saturday, 16th April 2011 @ 04:51:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I spoke to a man, a wise man at that,
He has wisdom inside him he shares when we chat.
We had a discussion, on various things
About love and of life and what hope that it brings.
A deep understanding of everything here,
A man with an insight many would fear.
He gave me a challenge, or so it would seem,
to come up with a poem, with words that I gleamed.
He gave me a title, and after a while,
I took up the challenge, with barely a smile.
It took me a while, but here is my rhyme,
And I want to thank you , for taking the time.
An impossible rainbow? What do we see?
The extreme possibilities, whenever we breathe?
An impossible rainbow? Youre thinking too hard,
Its right there inside you, not written on cards.
An impossible rainbow, the dreams that we dream,
The unfilled experience that existing life brings.
The challenge for all who live on this earth,
Is to live every minute from the moment of birth.
Dont make the excuses, dont talk yourself out,
The impossible rainbow, is a rainbow of doubt.
The impossible rainbow is possible you see,
You just need to realise, you are born free.
You make your decisions, you weigh up the pros,
Just take the first step, on the pathway you chose.
Dont think its impossible, dont count yourself out,
Just look deep inside you, let the colours come out.
By living each moment , to set your soul free,
The impossible rainbow, is possible you see.
Be proud of your spirit, feel blessed as you are
let the colours surround you, to be seen from afar.
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thistle_and_fern
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Re: The Impossible Rainbow
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 16th April 2011 @ 07:32:41 PM AEST
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I think you did!! This is awesome. I love the flow...
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Re: The Impossible Rainbow
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 17th April 2011 @ 08:43:40 AM AEST
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| Very good |
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Re: The Impossible Rainbow
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by deusdeira on
Tuesday, 19th April 2011 @ 04:03:19 AM AEST
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| Wonderful poem. I've never heard the phrase impossible rainbow, so very original. Not sure if I like the term, but its definitely original. hmmmm |
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Re: The Impossible Rainbow
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 10th June 2011 @ 02:11:47 PM AEST
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I think I'd have to say you picked up the challenge and ran with it perfectly.
A lovely piece washed with magic, what more can I say?
Steve |
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Re: The Impossible Rainbow
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by alicewhite on
Friday, 13th December 2013 @ 04:16:18 PM AEST
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| words washed with the wisdom of the ascended masters rays, beautiful.x |
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