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A Thousand Years
Contributed by
Loende
on
Saturday, 16th April 2011 @ 12:46:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A Thousand Years...
A thousand years, my love,
a thousand words,
to bide me and guide me
through these storms
that blow our way
A thousand days, my love,
a thousand fears,
have passed between us,
separated and washed,
all that we have been
A thousand doubts, my love,
a thousand hurts
that tried to take me,
to make me forget you
and all you are
A thousand tears, my love,
a thousand sighs,
could not come near
to prove my love...
not even in a thousand years.
~dmt 04/01/11
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Loende
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2011-04-16 12:46:12]
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Re: A Thousand Years
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by cashfan1 on
Sunday, 17th April 2011 @ 02:40:30 AM AEST
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| Well, what can I say? It is brilliantly thought out and simply, beautifully, executed. Well done. |
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Re: A Thousand Years
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by Tomboy on
Sunday, 17th April 2011 @ 07:17:32 AM AEST
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| love how your used the workds thousand years throughout the poem |
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Re: A Thousand Years
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th April 2012 @ 02:14:27 PM AEST
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I saw this today and at first, I wondered how in the hell I missed this. Then I see the date it was posted and remember, oh yeah, I was in hell.
There is obviously beauty in this poem but what makes it seem more beautiful to me is it sort of reminds me of soul mates reuniting over the millennium through each new life they share in reincarnation. After I read the first stanza, I could see images of centuries past and future beginnings.
Me likes!
Luff,
Timmers |
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Re: A Thousand Years
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th April 2014 @ 08:29:00 PM AEST
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beautifully woven and written with such flow and grace, exquisite,
hugs n' love nessa |
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