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the water tower
Contributed by
thunderflash
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Thursday, 14th April 2011 @ 08:51:28 AM in AEST
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The water tower.
How the tower sings her song,
As we sit and ponder all that’s wrong.
Our kaleidoscope eyes scan her mass,
We wait in wonder as time goes past.
But wait for what I hear you cry?
A journey forth to the minds eye.
Shifting time and a distant sun,
We long to recall all that’s gone.
And what of tomorrow I hear you call?
Our sanity screams before the fall.
But when we grow older will we reflect?
No memories hide just dreams we protect.
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thunderflash
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2011-04-14 08:51:28]
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Re: the water tower
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by DeGwynci on
Thursday, 14th April 2011 @ 09:19:12 AM AEST
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| This is a great description of psychedelic experience. Usually I have trouble putting into words what I feel from such experiences but I think you did a great job. |
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Re: the water tower
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by DanWhite on
Thursday, 14th April 2011 @ 10:52:26 AM AEST
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I liked the choice of the water tower as a central aspect for this poem, kind of a vantage point for the writing perspective.
I enjoyed it |
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Re: the water tower
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by unknown_utopia on
Friday, 15th April 2011 @ 08:24:48 AM AEST
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Deep InnerVision
well done...... |
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