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angry man
Contributed by
poeticjestix
on
Thursday, 14th April 2011 @ 03:46:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Angry man
in a white van
I watch you
in my rear view
and wonder why
you seethe and writhe
close you are
to rear of car
an egg sandwich
on your dashboard sits
curling edges
bit out wedges
a rolled up paper
with edges tapered
brown and faded
almost degraded
brownish stains
from long gone rain
trace the last stream
on your windscreen.
Kelly brook,
a picture stuck
behind your seat
well observed sheet
much time has gleaned
since van was cleaned
Angry man
in a white van
our transaction
was our last action
I don't regret
my task was set
5 minutes passed
the wheel was cast
times ain't good
I don't want blood
it is no caper
just pass me paper
or valid plastic
nothing too drastic
don't go insane
you are to blame
for things ain't sparkling
illegal parking
I can't pamper
for I'm a clamper
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poeticjestix
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Re: angry man
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th April 2011 @ 09:19:31 AM AEST
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Re: angry man
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by euphoema on
Monday, 18th April 2011 @ 11:06:52 AM AEST
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| very descriptive. i see the man in a white van very clearly as i read along! |
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