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true life
Contributed by
sue-i-sidex5
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Wednesday, 13th April 2011 @ 11:28:17 PM in AEST
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the nights always feel so alone. sometimes i feel like i dont belong. all this hopelessness, pain and feeling. didn't expect to be here this long still breathing. all i know is death instead of life. wish i didn't know what death was even like. i know that no one really cares and its fine. not like i haven't done my fair share over time. wish i could find a woman to call all mine share our souls and live throughout time, but this isn't a fairy tale its the life i call mine. walking around with a smile on my face while my soul is inside dying
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Re: true life
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by emystar on
Thursday, 14th April 2011 @ 12:39:45 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
I can remember feeling this way a few times in my life.
Even tho it's sad it written well.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: true life
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by Dirkj on
Thursday, 14th April 2011 @ 12:47:12 AM AEST
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| Hope somebody cheer you up soon, sad but nice writing |
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Re: true life
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th April 2011 @ 09:40:19 AM AEST
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| I have alot of writing likes this at home. I honestly thinks it makes your feel a tad better when you write it out. Hope you cheer up :) But excellent writing. I love how it showed the "true" emotion |
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