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sheeple
Contributed by
ming
on
Tuesday, 12th April 2011 @ 10:58:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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degree-zero
beige rational
extreme
emotionally
uncomfortable
purity out
the windows
toward the
cliffs statistically
meaningless
paths rolling
out into the world
from nowhere
to can you really
see me?
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2011-04-12 10:58:10]
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Re: sheeple
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by cashfan1 on
Wednesday, 13th April 2011 @ 04:01:09 AM AEST
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| This is certainly different. Very enjoyable to read, the style is smooth and accounts for, what is without doubt, some very fine talent. Well done. |
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Re: sheeple
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by Banjosandwitch on
Tuesday, 26th April 2011 @ 05:19:23 AM AEST
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| good work give me more poets like you |
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Re: sheeple
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by UNORTHODOX on
Friday, 27th May 2011 @ 06:17:05 AM AEST
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This passage is art in it's purest form
the way these words are layered in your mind is fascinating
"meaningless paths rolling
out into the world"
a line in this passage which stirred something deep within
and the rest of the pieces just shook me
always an honor to read your work
sincerely
-UNORTHODOX |
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