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Moved On

Contributed by xSavFagx on Monday, 11th April 2011 @ 09:34:20 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I know she doesn’t love you
I know she doesn’t even care
I know she doesn’t understand you
Like the way I did
When you were here

Why don’t you get it?
You’re blind for her, it seems.
She only wants you for your power
But, it’d be different with me

I’m not trying to tear her away
Nor do I want you upset
I simply want you to hear the death
Of a nimble heartbroken poet

My strategies are running thin
So is my patience and time
It looks like everybody loves her
But you all just need to open your eyes

She’s nothing but a fake.
An attention craving
Type of girl
I’m sorry if you’re offended
But, that’s just how it is

I’d tell her to her face
She needs to find her own
Even if you do prefer her
I won’t be there
When you need to run

The girl you always
Have to run to
When you are in stress
Well, guess what?
I’m gone for now
So just use your
Back-up plan

I guess I have grown up
I see that you have, too
So, I guess I’ll take a step
And tell you dead and straight on
That I, Savannah Grace, have done the right thing and moved on.

Copyright Â© xSavFagx ... [ 2011-04-11 09:34:20]
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Re: Moved On (User Rating: 1 )
by ElementZero on Monday, 11th April 2011 @ 05:47:33 PM AEST
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I have been there. I felt all the feelings you have, so this makes me relate to the poem more. "I'm not trying to tear her away, nor do I want you upset. I simply want you to hear the death, of a nimble heartbroken poet". Damn, that's all I CAN say for that part. Powerful stuff here. Good job.

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