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~~WINTER~~
Contributed by
Jenni_K
on
Sunday, 10th April 2011 @ 10:36:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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He reappeared in the winter of her years,
As gently as a summer breeze.
His voice was music to her ears,
She listened to him with such ease.
Their meeting was not one of chance,
They reconnected right away.
She knew she wanted him at first glance;
How she wished he was here to stay.
She imagined his fingers caressing her skin
As softly as the ocean spray.
Being with him made her head spin,
She prayed, with her, he would stay.
His smile mesmerized her all night,
The memory of his touch brought her pleasure.
About this man, she had to write,
Cause she had regained a treasure.
To lie down and sleep, she was afraid
Her mind, in a state of confusion.
She closed my eye for a minute and prayed
That he was not an apparition.
Jenni_K 10.04.11
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Jenni_K
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Re: ~~WINTER~~
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by emystar on
Sunday, 10th April 2011 @ 11:22:20 PM AEST
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It's so good to see you posting again.
Luv it.
huggs. smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: ~~WINTER~~
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by cashfan1 on
Monday, 11th April 2011 @ 02:08:24 AM AEST
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| This is truly a beautiful piece of writing. The rhyme is spot on and the flow is soft, making this a very readable poem. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: ~~WINTER~~
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by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Thursday, 5th January 2012 @ 08:11:26 PM AEST
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Well, was it...an apparition?
Reconnecting with loves from
the past can be an exciting
proposition for ones ready for
the newness to begin.
Good luck if this is the case.
Blessings,
Rob |
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Re: ~~WINTER~~
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th June 2012 @ 02:16:44 PM AEST
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Yayness for inspiration, Jenni. Me likes. Beautiful, soft, and sweet.
Tim |
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Re: ~~WINTER~~
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 12th June 2014 @ 09:31:45 PM AEST
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this is simply beautiful jenni girl, i especially really love
your first stanza, never too late for love:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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