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Control
Contributed by
Flex4life13
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Sunday, 10th April 2011 @ 07:34:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Start anew, no more feelings, no more dwelling.
Set me free, my heart it thirsts for something less compelling.
Hindering my future, Grasping my past.
It is only a state of mind, set me free at last.
Mightier than anticipated, this feeling retains control.
Overpowering and undermining it takes from me my all.
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2011-04-10 19:34:44]
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Re: Control
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by Sushila on
Sunday, 10th April 2011 @ 10:05:08 PM AEST
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| Beautifuly written with well thought out words of encouragement. Well done. |
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Re: Control
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by northernlights on
Sunday, 10th April 2011 @ 11:07:34 PM AEST
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| The mind is willing but the spirit is weak. That determination for a change for things to be different and the ensuing struggle..... it takes from me my all......empathy and honesty that cannot help but to communicate bringing understanding and hope,well written |
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Re: Control
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 11th April 2011 @ 05:44:30 PM AEST
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| Not a good poem. |
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Re: Control
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by Banjosandwitch on
Tuesday, 12th April 2011 @ 05:35:23 AM AEST
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| exellent poetry ubergood |
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