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Forgive me my tears
Contributed by
northernlights
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Sunday, 10th April 2011 @ 03:26:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Oh cruelest life, what canst thou gain?
From keeping my heart, my soul in pain!
Wouldst I have known for all these years,
No answer would ever stem these tears,
For though I bravely travel on,
A part of me hast truly gone.
And search my soul in anguish still,
This sorrow neither choice nor will.
For who can mend a broken heart?
Or mask the face to play the part?
And who can halt the tide of time?
To give me back what’s rightly mine!
For this I have not asked nor chosen,
From hand of fate my life is frozen.
This cup, mine lips were forced to take,
Such wretched a life for God to forsake!
And now I bow to relentless tides of time,
An ocean of tomorrows’ never to be mine!
And in the focus of life, a reflective mirror.
Love as a flame ever dimmer and dimmer
Oh fleeting window! oh dream of perfection!
Forgive me my indulgence and introspection.
Forgive me my weakness, my gathering fears
Through shattered glass forgive me my tears,
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northernlights
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Re: Forgive me my tears
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by emystar on
Sunday, 10th April 2011 @ 06:48:36 PM AEST
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Awesome writing, friend.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Forgive me my tears
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by cashfan1 on
Monday, 11th April 2011 @ 02:13:10 AM AEST
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| Wow and wow again! This is the stand out piece on the site at the moment. Very strong, brilliantly executed rhyme and rhythm. I really enjoyed this, thanks Anna. |
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Re: Forgive me my tears
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 11th April 2011 @ 06:36:55 PM AEST
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| Incredibly written and incredibly tear jerking!!!! I am quite impressed, Anna!!!! Stunning. |
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Re: Forgive me my tears
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by Banjosandwitch on
Wednesday, 13th April 2011 @ 05:10:00 AM AEST
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| spell check my friend nice write though |
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Re: Forgive me my tears
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by Banjosandwitch on
Wednesday, 13th April 2011 @ 05:10:02 AM AEST
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| spell check my friend nice write though |
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Re: Forgive me my tears
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 16th April 2011 @ 09:06:35 AM AEST
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This flow is oh so excellent
wow
your writing leaves me speechless at times......
well done. |
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Re: Forgive me my tears
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by myheartsvoice on
Tuesday, 19th April 2011 @ 10:00:51 AM AEST
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" Forgive me my weakness, my gathering fears
Through shattered glass forgive me my tears, "
U got me in tears, lol. this a absolutely beautiful,
especially the line above, plain 2 c u more than
wrote this, u lived it, and now i'm reading it and
feeling it, ty 4 sharing.
ty also 4 ur comment.
Ben
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