|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Summer Rain
Contributed by
sexygirl
on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 04:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
|
Outside my window clouds are forming in the sky
The heaviness that fills those warm summer breezes
Birds chirping and pecking the ground while others fly
Pollen fills the air as it tickles my nose while causing some sneezes
People rushing to get home before the rain
Winds blowing some towels on a near by clothes line
Music of rain drops tapping on my window pane
It's early , it's only ten past nine
Sounds carried in the distance of a whistle blowing of a train as it makes its' way down the tracks
Lightening flashed across a darkened sky while low clouds hover
Thunder rolled loud and clear back to back
Big drops of rain hit the grounds with a splat
As fast as the rain started it was over
A rain bow of colors across a peaceful sky imagin that
Copyright ©
sexygirl
... [
2003-04-27 04:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Summer Rain
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 08:38:00 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
very good imagery..you brought to life the summer rain with your words..good write
Shari |
|
|
Re: Summer Rain
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 05:32:05 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
ahh, i love your poetry, and i love the rain too, this poem is vividly beautiful:) ty for sharing!
hugs n' love nessa |
|
|
Re: Summer Rain
(User Rating: 1 )
by ravenblack_phoenix on
Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 08:08:55 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Pretty ^.^ I love the rain, once I saw a double rainbow from my backyard, but of course I couldn't find the camera =( But I like your poem =D It reminded me of that moment |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
