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the death of a dove
Contributed by
whisper-on-the-wind
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Sunday, 10th April 2011 @ 02:47:15 PM in AEST
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Take flight and soar into the sky above the clouds and over the sea
The deep blue ocean draws you near to warm your wings in the summer sun
What dreams we share above the clouds, beyond the world that ties us down
Let's fly so high and never return, be free my love it's now your turn...
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Re: the death of a dove
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by emystar on
Sunday, 10th April 2011 @ 06:55:56 PM AEST
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Beautiful writing.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: the death of a dove
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by cashfan1 on
Monday, 11th April 2011 @ 02:15:26 AM AEST
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| This is truly delightful. Reading this I am transported to the high wide sky above the swirling ocean waves, lovely writing, well done. |
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Re: the death of a dove
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by fish on
Monday, 11th April 2011 @ 03:55:00 AM AEST
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| great imagery in this piece you penned here. i could practically see with my mind's eye a couple enjoying love while it last, before death, the kill joy, brings everything to nothing but painful memories |
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