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No one
Contributed by
XXXsilvervoodooXXX
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Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 03:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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posted on 26-Apr-2003 12:24:42 AM
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All the things that I can feel,
sometimes I just have to wonder
can another ever make me this happy,
or will I dream forever,
do they love me like I love me?
Could they just see what I can see?
Fire inside I continue to live,
while outside I just can't stand still,
and I lift myself to breathe again,
and I scream again to breathe.
If I tell you I feel the same tears,
will you love me like I love me?
If my blood ran down the floor,
could you see what I can see?
Do I have to die alone?
Where is the one to stand with me,
a face that is worth the smile,
upon the croud I'm searching,
who will stand with me?
Do I have to die alone?
No one will love me like I love me,
no one will love me like I love me.
Copyright ©
XXXsilvervoodooXXX
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2003-04-27 03:35:00]
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Re: No one
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by green on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 07:40:39 AM AEST
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| this really moved me.i am sure u have your own thoughts or meaning behind your writting this,but i feel like your words at times for my own reasons.this is good |
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Re: No one
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by green on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 07:51:15 AM AEST
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| sorry skiped a few words in other comment,what i ment to say was at times i feel the same way and wonder about people and how much they really love me.cause i would never hurt my self as they do me.i like your work |
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Re: No one
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 08:42:51 AM AEST
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interesting write
Shari |
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Re: No one
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by Jaima on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 06:28:40 AM AEST
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| It's interesting, i don't think anyone can love you or hate in the same way as you can love or hate yourself..nice poem..i like it..good work |
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Re: No one
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 01:02:54 AM AEST
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| you have captured a single moment in time and my breath caught reading this... wonderful poem, hugs nessa |
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