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Everytime
Contributed by
KLYNN
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Friday, 8th April 2011 @ 06:57:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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EVERYTIME I SEE YOU
EVERYTIME I LOOK IN YOUR EYES
EVERYTIME I HEAR YOUR VOICE
MY HEART BEGINS TO MELT
I KNOW FOR SURE NOW WITHOUT A
DOUBT
I WAS VERY FORTUNATE WITH THE
WAY MY CARDS WERE DEALT
Copyright ©
KLYNN
... [
2011-04-08 18:57:51]
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Re: Everytime
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by emystar on
Friday, 8th April 2011 @ 08:08:15 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Short but good writing.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Everytime
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by NightOwl61 on
Friday, 8th April 2011 @ 10:52:01 PM AEST
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| a gently penned gem. Could do with a little tightening up, and doing away with all the caps. They make it seem as if the writer is yelling at the reader. Other than that, great short write. Much enjoyed. tfs |
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