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Shot Through The Heart
Contributed by
kittiekat
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Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 01:35:00 AM in AEST
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Shot Through The Heart
This knife I see is deep and thick
Holding hate and disgrace
The person holding this is what I thought
Was true love
As I pass my un-denying love
I'm shot
This knife passes through me and
Cuts into my heart
Sliced in half with
No drizzles of blood left
You look away
Not even realizing
What you have done to me
Grin and laugh
As I collapse to the ground
I no longer endure any love from you
Only distress
All the love drained out completly
Gone.
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kittiekat
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2003-04-27 01:35:00]
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Re: Shot Through The Heart
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 08:51:47 AM AEST
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You sum up the total of a broken love affair beautifully.
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Re: Shot Through The Heart
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 07:23:32 PM AEST
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kittie- gee thanks! thanks for ur comment!
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