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outsider
Contributed by
poeticjestix
on
Thursday, 7th April 2011 @ 01:43:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
didactic
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Accept your fate
accept your place
accept nowhere will fit your face.
Accept you're one
and they a throng
no one will listen to your song.
Accept their way
yet one more day
and watch as they take all away.
Accept your right
reject a fight
and slip away into the night.
Accept they're strong
your rights are wrong
no longer here where you belong
Accept the mind that you had set
was coiled too tight and won't forget.
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poeticjestix
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2011-04-07 13:43:42]
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Re: outsider
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Thursday, 7th April 2011 @ 03:33:54 PM AEST
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wow! A very strong and influential write this is. The conflict described here must be man vs. society-one of the conflicts i am most amazed at. Take care and may your writing inspire all,
Deidra |
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Re: outsider
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by cupkakemonstah on
Thursday, 7th April 2011 @ 04:19:23 PM AEST
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| that's beautiful |
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Re: outsider
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by Shandra on
Thursday, 7th April 2011 @ 08:08:43 PM AEST
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| Everybody got a little outsider in them whether it was in one line, or the whole poem, I know I saw me in one or two. ; )Outstanding |
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Re: outsider
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by yazoo_dzone on
Thursday, 21st April 2011 @ 10:19:52 PM AEST
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Enjoyed this thought. They can't take away what is in the mind.
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