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Logan's Poem.
Contributed by
marlenarawrxd
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Tuesday, 5th April 2011 @ 05:08:36 PM in AEST
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Thank you for your patience,
I know it's taken me a while.
But when I really think about it,
You're the reason for my smile.
Your heart is pure and golden,
Your personality lights up the place.
Your voice makes me happy,
And I just adore your face.
You're so very caring,
And you know just what to say.
I'd be an idiot,
If I ever walked away.
You always make things better,
Even when everything is wrong.
And after all that has happened,
It's only made us strong.
You've been there every time,
And now I know it's true,
I can say this because I mean it,
I really do love you.
It might sound cliche,
But what am I waiting for?
I just know that every word you say,
Just makes me love you more.
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marlenarawrxd
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2011-04-05 17:08:36]
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Re: Logan's Poem.
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by 619Prisoner on
Tuesday, 5th April 2011 @ 05:43:41 PM AEST
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| Clear and sweet. Thank you for posting this. |
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Re: Logan's Poem.
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by NightOwl61 on
Monday, 11th April 2011 @ 10:51:42 PM AEST
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| had to chuckle a bit when I reached 'It might sound cliche," as writers I get the impression we've all been there, done that at least a thousand times. A fun read. You made your reader feel like you know him/her. Right well penned. |
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