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Lost and Found
Contributed by
Cancer
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Saturday, 26th April 2003 @ 09:35:00 PM in AEST
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can you help me
i seem to have lost my mind
i was wondering if you might have it here
i've looked everywhere else
and if you don't have it
i'll never find it, i fear
my innocence is missing as well
hope, happiness, and tolerance have vanished too
have any of those come through?
they've all been gone so very long
if i don't find them soon
i might lose my patience too
and i can't keep track of my temper
everytime i find it, i just lose it again
perhaps it's best if it stays lost
i often feel like i'm lost, myself
if i could avoid that, i'd pay anything
no matter what the cost
i don't suppose you've seen my lost love either
no, i didn't figure you had
ran away some time ago, with some guy
old enough to be her dad
and what about all these "lost" people
the christians keep moaning about
between you and me, i don't think they're "lost" at all
maybe one day, the christians will figure that out
oh dear, now i've lost the will to live
i'll never find it i'm afraid
for as long as i can remember
it's been trying to slip away
well, i guess i'll just open this vein
and slip into Nothingness
it's all getting grey, but wait a minute
yes, i think i found my lost happiness
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Cancer
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2003-04-26 21:35:00]
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Re: Lost and Found
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by shelby on
Saturday, 26th April 2003 @ 09:42:02 PM AEST
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wow great job. You have so many emtions wrapped up into one poem!! I wish for you all the happiness you deserve.
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Re: Lost and Found
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by shelby on
Saturday, 26th April 2003 @ 09:42:15 PM AEST
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wow great job. You have so many emotions wrapped up into one poem!! I wish for you all the happiness you deserve.
Michelle |
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Re: Lost and Found
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 26th April 2003 @ 10:44:44 PM AEST
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Great write,,,,I really love how you wrote this..
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Re: Lost and Found
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 26th April 2003 @ 11:18:18 PM AEST
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Woah Cancer this write was really intense, You really nailed down all the emotions in this one.
This is the best write Ive seen since joining this site.
I really hope you find what you look for in life, you really deserve to.
I look forward to checking out more of your work. |
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Re: Lost and Found
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by hardcoreputa on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 12:37:00 AM AEST
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this poem goes through it all, emtyness, religious stupidity, suicide, love, cutting, just everything... it seems like u wrote this in intervals... but i like it it basically sums up the way u feel on many issues... great ending ~Apryl
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