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The Real Me
Contributed by
theunknown
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Sunday, 3rd April 2011 @ 03:15:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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If you look past the makeup
You'll find a girl thats insecure
If you pull up my sleeves
You'll see that to me pain is the only things thats real
If you watch my day from morning to night
You'll see how many tears I cry
If you look in my eyes
You'd see what I'm willing to show you
The Real Me
The person who hates her life but tries to pull through
The girl who's best friend is the pain that she needs to get through
The teenager that puts forth strength
The girl who cries because she bares her soul to only herself
Because to her no one cares enough to look past the makeup
To tear down the wall the shes built up
To look through the facade
to find
The Real Me
Copyright ©
theunknown
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2011-04-03 15:15:52]
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Re: The Real Me
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by Tomboy on
Sunday, 3rd April 2011 @ 03:45:57 PM AEST
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| Very revealing poem. Watch for spelling errors "whose" instead of "who's" and "she's" and "that's" instead of "shes" and "thats." Otherwise a great read! |
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Re: The Real Me
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by theunknown on
Sunday, 3rd April 2011 @ 04:06:39 PM AEST
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| not my fault i posted it from my phone it has spell check |
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Re: The Real Me
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by marlenarawrxd on
Sunday, 3rd April 2011 @ 08:44:16 PM AEST
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| This is so relatable for me. I about cried. |
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Re: The Real Me
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by kleetas on
Monday, 4th April 2011 @ 03:01:29 AM AEST
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| the subtle difference between "spelling" and the correct use of the correctly spelled words is lost on the "reel" me ..see the difference?If you are going to illustrate an incorrect use of words ,to a junior writer,have the "smarts" to do it correctly!Dig that?...mr.corrector of lame attempts..sheesh!..I rate the correction department "0"....now,go to your room,and think about what you just did.Learn anything?...thenk u....bwahahaha..comedy department scores one...two... |
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Re: The Real Me
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by theunknown on
Wednesday, 6th April 2011 @ 08:10:11 PM AEST
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| hey seriously i don't usually misspell things in fact i won the spelling bee three years in a row so suck on that i bet i'm smarter than you too |
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