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Stuck Inside Reality, mark 2
Contributed by
evanescencefreak
on
Sunday, 3rd April 2011 @ 01:34:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Lock up the door
And throw away the key
Shut me up inside
I dont want to see
I tried my best to please you
I mean it I really did
But how can I read your mind
And mistakes you deathly forbid
I bound myself to you in thoughts
Much stronger than in words
So when you died, I grew cold inside
My life unflew backwards
I fought against the pain, the fear
All I wanted was you to be near
To see you, feel you everyday
Touch you hear you
But there was a gulf that lay between us
A break I could never heal
The love I once felt for you
I could not, would not feel
Seperation was meant to be a blessing
Privacy a joy
But life was never simple
Neither was your ploy
And so against my efforts
Your pain it still did break
My ever aching, bleeding heart
Was yours still free to take
Copyright ©
evanescencefreak
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2011-04-03 13:34:10]
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Re: Stuck Inside Reality, mark 2
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by CommasCanSeperate on
Sunday, 3rd April 2011 @ 02:51:45 PM AEST
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I fought against the pain, the fear
All I wanted was you to be near
My emotion just now.
Thanks so much.
Great read x |
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Re: Stuck Inside Reality, mark 2
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by theunknown on
Sunday, 3rd April 2011 @ 02:57:08 PM AEST
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ive been there many times actually most of my thirteen years, no matter what we show on the outside its never what i feel on the inside
great right
*emi* |
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Re: Stuck Inside Reality, mark 2
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by Tomboy on
Sunday, 3rd April 2011 @ 04:00:26 PM AEST
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| very well done |
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Re: Stuck Inside Reality, mark 2
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by hacktastic on
Saturday, 9th April 2011 @ 02:27:44 AM AEST
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Excellent job on the re-write.
I sent you a more detailed message to you Inbox.
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