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Translation
Contributed by
Aspirant
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Saturday, 2nd April 2011 @ 08:08:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Along the dark street
Wealthy cinders glow like words
Written in the sky
Copyright ©
Aspirant
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2011-04-02 20:08:43]
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Re: Translation
(User Rating: 1 )
by UNORTHODOX on
Saturday, 2nd April 2011 @ 11:26:29 PM AEST
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From one perspective the imagery
of this piece is lovely
(depending on who's eyes are watching)
a truly emotional write in that from
the outside there is darkness and cold
but on the inside all is warm and inviting
well scripted,truely divine
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Re: Translation
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by Ambivalence on
Sunday, 3rd April 2011 @ 06:27:38 PM AEST
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what a magical piece of art you've conveyed here! :)
take care
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