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Tell Me What I Need To Do
Contributed by
JStickles
on
Saturday, 2nd April 2011 @ 07:36:50 PM in AEST
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oops
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Do you notice me?
Do you just see me?
Am I the guy you just walk by every day,
Not caring about and worrying about?
Or am I the guy you like?
And afraid to tell your friends to,
What about your parents?
Are they the ones who hold you back from me?
Just tell me what to do,
And I’ll do them for you.
But, if you don’t tell me then,
There is no easy way
For us to move on.
So basically for things
That I do for you
Aren’t good enough.
Then don’t bother,
Telling me what to do.
Copyright ©
JStickles
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2011-04-02 19:36:50]
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Re: Tell Me What I Need To Do
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by emystar on
Saturday, 2nd April 2011 @ 10:23:04 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Great writing and straits to the point.
A bit sad but it's looks like u have things in control.
Blessings,huggs,
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Re: Tell Me What I Need To Do
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by Sheveg on
Tuesday, 5th April 2011 @ 02:58:41 PM AEST
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Are you giving away your power?
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