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solid dream
Contributed by
poeticjestix
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Saturday, 2nd April 2011 @ 02:35:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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What Is solid? What is real?
I am flesh and blood. I feel.
For carbon life-forms are consumed
with solid things and bangs and booms
but solid is something we miss
in fact all is a gentle mist
that would collapse within itself
if solid came. A mighty delf
would form within the all we know
and all would stretch like gloopy dough
towards the core of solid mass.
Metal, rock and toughened glass-
as I said no more than steam
perhaps this solid is a dream?
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Re: solid dream
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by Tomboy on
Saturday, 2nd April 2011 @ 03:07:12 PM AEST
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| Ethereal aspect, interesting read. |
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Re: solid dream
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by Sheveg on
Tuesday, 5th April 2011 @ 03:05:16 PM AEST
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I liked it. Interesting.
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