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Emotions
Contributed by
duff
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Saturday, 2nd April 2011 @ 08:49:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Unified in a graceful slick they dive
Perched beasts free falling into stars
Their bloody hearts needing romance
An army of devotion cheated by love
Fiery eyes bombing the sky with pain
Cupid’s assassins firing on satellites
Slaying the heartbreakers one by one
Condemned to hunting the surgeon
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Re: Emotions
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by UNORTHODOX on
Saturday, 2nd April 2011 @ 10:31:18 AM AEST
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An Elaborate and well depicted passage
emotions are as complex, as this array of artistic depth before us
in only moments my mind was flooded by imagery,
metaphorically superb,awesome piece.
-UNORTHODOX |
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Re: Emotions
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 2nd April 2011 @ 10:44:23 AM AEST
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What a wonderfully different take strong empowered impassioned response building to the slaying, the want for revenge and then plummeting into the inevitable I love that last line
condemned to hunting the surgeon, you have so much life in your writing and you never fail to stir the soul. |
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Re: Emotions
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by NightOwl61 on
Saturday, 2nd April 2011 @ 01:24:24 PM AEST
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| Quite a vivid, potent piece. Penned with a bit of fire. tfs |
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Re: Emotions
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by cashfan1 on
Sunday, 3rd April 2011 @ 02:01:45 AM AEST
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| Very strong writing. Deep and highly emotive, this is a fine piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Emotions
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by ming on
Tuesday, 12th April 2011 @ 10:23:03 AM AEST
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Awesome write! 'Slaying the heartbreakers one by one' Love it!
ming
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Re: Emotions
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by deusdeira on
Saturday, 14th May 2011 @ 03:40:36 AM AEST
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| "An army of devotion, cheated by love." I loved this line. It makes me think of when I have lost someone I am devoted to because they fall in love with another. |
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Re: Emotions
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 11th April 2016 @ 08:34:19 PM AEST
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A army of devotion,love that line,
excellent flow
great poem...... |
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